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 *A 1P/2P: Pound the mochi
 ==Timing Notes==
-*Hit: The number will go down; when the number is at 0, mochi will fly out and land in a woman's hands.
+*Hit: The number will go down. When the number is at 0, mochi will fly out and land in a woman's hands.
 *Barely: None for this game.
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 ==Trivia==
-*Mochi is a traditional Japanese pastry made from rice. While there are easier alternate ways of making mochi now, as well as assembly line mochi using special factory machines and robots, what you're seeing here is mochitsuki, a mochi-making ritual for New Year's Day.
+*Mochi is a traditional Japanese pastry made from rice. While there are easier, alternative ways of making mochi now, what is performed in the game is mochitsuki, a mochi-making ritual for New Year's Day.
-*Sometimes, if you reach high level, [[Dough Dudes]] will appear as kagami mochi instead of a normal mochi.
+*Occasionally after obtaining a large score,  [[Dough Dudes]] will appear as Kagami mochi instead of normal mochi.
 ==In Other Languages==
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